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[离任作者] 【感受满地月光】 上 33

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再次感受满地月光。主人公与馨姐再会，又是一番激情。二人前期的感情和情色描写是我的最爱。后期情色有限太过简单，感情描写也不多。希望作者在主人公在与馨姐以及以后可能的与MM的关系纠缠多下功夫。感情的细腻描写比繁复的情爱描写更引人入胜。
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